This is a short piece, mostly about getting a piece. Allie and Juliet work together. And are attracted to each other. And flirt, a lot. Allie’s birthday seems to be the right time for Juliet to finally make her move on the older attorney. Allie’s ok with that even though her co-workers firmly warn her away from Juliet.
The story is kind of sweet and an easy read. There are some grammatical issues but it really didn’t take away from the action. The beginning is fun, the middle is hot, and the ending probably should have gone a different direction. But with a fic this short, the beginning and middle make the very short ending tolerable.
This author has loads of other work and this is my first experience with it. I’ll give something else a shot and see how that goes.